The Ball (Story writen by Aurélie and Andréa)

Hello! Today, with my friend Aurélie F. (your blog : http://aurelieftn.blogspot.fr/ )
We have finished our story in class :) (I precise the aim was to make a story in 55 words)

We don't have our mark yet and if you like our story, maybe, we will get a better mark. ;p
Enjoy reading it!

The Ball

One summer night, in a deserted park, Elizabeth was reading and Jenny, her lovery daughter, was on the swing. Suddenly, the creaking sound of the swing stopped. Disturbing silence. Jenny had disappeared ! Elizabeth immediately began to look for the little girl when she saw Jenny's ball roll to her feet.
It was Jenny's head, cut.

Really, this story is gloomy, dark and strange, but it was the theme. ;) Goodbye!